ferret854's Reviews

[L4D: A matter of time]

Review

Excellently done. (5/5 10/10) This is good and especially considering your two week deadline is a quite exceptional piece of work. You have a great talent for animation and i look forward to seeing any more of your submissions. They will be very good especially without a time limit.

[Hola_Pescado!]

Review

This is how ideas mash together, just reminds me how confusing it can get. Nice flash 5/5 10/10.

[Gone Too Far Too]

Review - by Ferret854

You are far too hard on yourself in the last one, you did very well. This is unique and might just well be one of the best animations put to audio I have seen so far. The music is quite catchy as (sparten517 and Fadewolf) said. I like it. Well done 5/5 and 10/10.

[speek adventure 3 (again)]

Review

Not bad, seems based off of sonic but in a tropical setting, and he's green. But as i've said before on other reviews, the inspiration had to come from somewhere. Anyway passes for me, its an interesting platformer and has potential, keep working at it, you're doing fine for a one man game design team.

Scored: (3/5) (8/10)

PS: Please leave what language you speak mainly so i can reply in said language via google translate.

BobSpeekFlash responds:

english:
thanks man! you do not realize how important their contribution, the game resembles the sonic and the walk style of mario (straight line). has bugs but I guess it does not affect much (but I will correct later).
and thanks for asking my language, which is the Portuguese (Brazil).

portugues:
obrigado cara! voce não imagina como é importante sua contribuição, o jogo lembra sonic com o modo de andar do mario (linha reta). tem bugs mas eu acho que não afeta muito (mas eu corrigirei depois).
e obrigado por perguntar meu idioma,que é o portugues (brasil).

[Bounce :)]

Review: Bounce

All in all decent game, may need to work on the panels not spawning below the ball on random occasion, or may have just been my bad luck ( usually is lol ) Not bad a creative bounce on (object) to get to (goal) worth a play-through, demonstrates a good effort on your part (Not bad but not an original concept(*)). Nicely done anyway

Scored: (4/5) (9/10) Keep up the good work.

(*)But then again is anything completely original today? Everything seems to be based off of something. Dont take that the wrong way, though because it is original just the concept of the game isn't. concept: bounce off of (object) to reach (goal) [I will remove this if you wish]

PoisonSky responds:

nah thanks. and yes, you are epicly unlucky to fall off the screen before hitting a single platform, if that's what you mean. really helpful review, thanks :)

[One Chance]

One Chance

Personally its OK art, not so good, and without a replay there is no chance of seeing the results of your other choices, however, this is designed to be based on real life. I believe you should spend time with family from the experience I had with it. All in all, I think that the game needs more work on the art portion, the story line is not very good but presents a very real possible threat in the distant future. Story line needed some patching and art needs some upgrading but other than that. You will get better in time if you keep working at it, and take your time next time if you rushed this one.

[On the Rise - Single]

You asked me to check out your audio and give some pointers?
Well, the only tips I have for someone who can make something like this are to keep the good work whatever you used as your synths and drumkits are good. I did notice a few places in this track where it offers a perfect place to do a melody drop and another where you could drop some heavier basslines. I say 5/5 Well composed but keep working on it, there is ALWAYS room for improvement, I am currently working to do the same with my composition skills. Regardless though good work on this.

[Waves]

It sounds nice, I like it. It is however, a bit short but you got some style with this. Well done.
Composition: 2/2
Melody: .5/.5
Personal Opinion: 1.0/1.5

Greatest219 responds:

thanks :)

[The Jump (JQ)]

I concur with fredtheguy, it lacks organization, but it isnt a bad thing. I know a lot of good songs that are random. It sounds nice, and I like it (4.5/5)

JQiscool responds:

Thanks for reviewing!!